Eagles+Story+Time+1

= Let's #|write a story! You've been learning about descriptive and figurative language, now it's time to have some serious fun with it. = = In this story each #|classmate will contribute to the story by adding information and details a few sentences at a time. Use as much descriptive language, adjectives, sensory imagery, alliteration, simile, metaphor, personification, and hyperbole as you can! = = = = Here we go. = = = = Once upon a time a large, hairy, pink elephant was running full speed down the long winding highway. Her name was Penelope, and she had just come from a ballet performance, where she danced the leading role better than any elephant had before. Penelope was wearing a beautiful flowing, silky, multicolored tutu, which rippled in the strong breeze like an American flag high upon a flagpole. She ran as though her life depended on it, because, unbelievably enough, it did. AB = =Because her part was that good. so she ran as a cat chasing a mouse then "bang" she ran right through the wall. But she keeped on going she crashed in to a building and still ran!But she jumped off of a tower and on a plane but that was a big mistake! C.P.R= = = =**Then "bang" she hit the ground "oww, that hurt"she said. But** **still ran after that crazy weird mouse.After she said "forget it i'll get the crazy mouse later"Then later she went home where it was nice and cozy and she sat by the warm fireplace. Then she went to go get hot tea and some nice slimmy frog soup "that will warm up my tummy" she said then the doorbell rang "ding dong".R.G.**= = = = At the door was an old, ugly, smelly, old horse "ARE YOU CRAZY!" said the horse when you were running to catch that crazy,fast.weird mouse you almost ran over me and made me mess up my makeup.Penelope looked up and thought "What makeup? nothing could cover up all that ugly" "Well are you going to invite me in?" said the horse. "NOW WAYY" said Penelope you can find somewhere else to stay." DING DING DING" that was here oven "GOTTA GOO BYE!" She slammed the door on the old horse. "HOW RUDE!"said the horse E.K. = = = = Then another boney knock aproched the door.She was a sick like a dog she was a Grandma named Victoria she was VERY ill,pale,sick.Penelope was not shore if she should let Victoria in,she knew that if that was her she would want her to let her in.So she let her in and offered Victoria some steeming hot chocolate with mini marshmelows. N.P =

== After Penelope and Victoria had their delicious hot chocolate Victoria stumbled out the door. Penelope was very confused. She thought to herself what did she do wrong, it didn't bother her for long because the doorbell rang. "AGAIN!" said Penelope frustrated " I can't just relax?!?!". She answered the door anyway. It was a stinky, young little doe. The doe was crying but she managed to sniffle " Where is my mommy?!?! Do you know?!" Penelope chuckled because she thought it was cute and fake. But then she realized she wasn't joking. She started to feel bad.N.A ==

=== She lets the Doe in to try and comfort her. After the doe calmed down she managed to tell Penelope what happened. "My named is Dawn and my mommy, the rest of the colossal herd were munching on some scrumptious, green grass when a pink,animal came dashing by in a rainbow skirt came and spooked the herd and run away. I was left behind and I could not find the rest of the herd more importantly my mommy." Penelope gasped, partly because the story was sad but because she knew what that pink blob was that came running by and knew her very well, only thing that it could be was HER!!!!!!!! RW ===

== Penelope gave the doe some warm,relaxing hot cocoa.Since, Penelope felt so bad she told the doe that the big pink animal with the free-flying multicolored tutu was her. She apologized but, the doe got as mad as a bee. The doe yelled "WHAT!" at Penelope and the doe got all hyper again. Penelope explained she was more sorry than ever but, the doe did not listen. The doe left angrily to find her mother herself. When Penelope realized that the doe went to go find her mother Penelope scampered out the door to help, without the doe seeing her. Penelope saw a bigger doe and saw that the bigger doe was the doe's mother that came to her house. Penelope chatted with the mother doe and explained she was really sorry and that she would get the baby doe back to her mother safely.K.A. ==

So penelope went to find the Dawn.but then a scary dragon said to penelopy who dares to cross thro the dragon forest. me penelopy. so then the dragon said your not jorge .yup. oh. then go right thro thanks then penelopy saw dawn she was crying her knee was scraped .so then penlopy brought dawn to the mother doe.DINNNGGGGGGGGG DONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGG WHY CANT I HAVE PEASE AND QUIET. At the door was jorge the knight. i told to wach out for this drgon. he said i know about that dragon thats why you get the job

== What job do I have to do. The knight said "that dragon won't let me bye and I have to get to the other side where my horse got spooked, and go retrive her and be on my way". Why do I have to do it why don't you just go tell him I never thought of that well bye. Ding dong. OH MY GOD why can't i get just ONE minute of piece of quiet without the door ringing. Penelope went and answered the door and saw a white horse with huge white wings she was like a dimond in a mine and smelled better than the old smelly horse before. I was bumped in my some knight that said to go here for help. What? I need help I lost my foal. Bye the way my name is Pegaus. Now please help me find her I was worrying my mane off. What dose she look like. She looks like gold in a mine and very hyper and sweet and needs her mom so HELP me! Okay lets go find her. Thank you ==

A.O
I went to look for the little hyper foal in the great green good glorious woods. I climbed the steep rocky side of the mountain. I looked down and saw the little beautiful foal in a patch of thick trees. I went running down the mountain side and all of a sudden I went tumbling.Once I stopped I noticed that I was right in front of the foal. I brought her back to Pegaus and said goodbye to everyone.

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Oh thanks u so much said the mother I have been looking all over for u she was as dirty as a pick plump pig right after taking a bath in her brown mud bath. Lets go home, said Pegaus so we can clean u up. Ok mommy the foal said as Penelope slamed the door right in there face. Then she opened it again and said sorry and told them that she has been bothered all day and hasn't got in to reast so she was really fustrated.She was glad they understood her so when she shut the door for the final time. Knock Knock!!!!!!!!!! OMG I am going to be a mean feirce dragan in about 3 seconds when she opened the door it was the knight. What do u want said Penelope.

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===** My favorite kind of ice cream is cookies and cream. Jim thought to himself i can give her cookies and cream ice cream for her soul. The walked down the bummpy road to get the the salon even though jim is a boy. They had to pass the ice cream shop on the way so Jim told Penelope" i will get you ice cream". "ONLY UNDER ONE CONDITION YOUR SOU"L!!!!!! Penelope really likes her ice cream she knew she had to do it. "Fine i will do it Penelope said". "Ok Jim said. Right before she was going to give Jim her soul she say something on the conner of her eye. **===
 * I want your soul.Well you can't have it sister,cried Penelope.Girl,you need a make-over.Let me help you.First i'll take you to the salon.I'm a guy though,said the knight.By the way my name is Jim.So ,whats your favorite flavor of icecream.M.C.**

** KG **

 * She saw this big old smelly white skeleton running to her with his bone chating when they hit each other when the skeleton is running he to penenope and sayes dont do it and penenope say dont do what to the skeleton you know what dont fall for his trick you are going to give your soul to jim and he going to take it and not buy you your cookies and cream ice cream and penenope is not taking the story and she how do you know so so the skeleton said i was one of them he did it to hear the story i was in the same situation he took me to the place i loved and i was so grite that i did not think it thought and i gave it to him before then in no time i was like this so dont do it penenope so penenope said i am not going to do that and penenope slaped jim and walk away in a sassey maner when penenope got home and this is what she saw. **
 * jgb **